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To A World That Changed My Todays { HM }

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Captivated moments of my pondering thoughts

Travel back a time when I was oh so young,

Scents to the taste-buds,

A wondrous sight befalls,

Sunsets painted scenery,

Breathtaking colours burnt to the moon and the darkness of the skies,

Ebony carved trees fade into the distance,

Silhouette it dances and it breathes,

Fellow men tribe within this nomad land,

Treads the steps of ancestors,

Stories and traditions fed,

Mud huts dotted onto barren soil,

Sprigs break through the dryness,

Cattle loam as do the goats,

Bells ring to the necks as their leader takes control,

Distant raw caller to his pride,

Settles as the night air cools,

Leopard kill climbs to relish his prey,

Caught by the spot light,

Dusty paths settle,

Jeep ride takes my further into this wonderful land,

Still warm in t shirts and shorts,

Water hole welcomes its guests,

Migrating hoofs tread,

Refreshed to wander,

All these memories and so much more,

Changed a child, and that child was me

 

Author notes

Strange how some thing as simple floods the memories and by doing so, creates the grounding that became me.

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  • CherryOnTop
    January 2, 2008
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    Congrats on your HM Julie.This is so powerful and thought provoking.


  • Abe 1
    December 17, 2007
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    really luv what you have writtn i feel i am in africa wiv ya


  • CherryOnTop
    December 17, 2007

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    This journey you have taken me on is such a treat.The imagery you put into it let me visualize your change.


  • loveyourfate
    December 16, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry. A wonderful poem. I must say the ending wes superb, I loved the last two lines. Well written!


  • Mezclita
    December 16, 2007

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    I agree, you are your origin in as much as you are what you want to be... appreciating your roots is not always easy because it's a package deal, like everything else in life really. It does sounds like you had a beautiful childhood though... the colors, sights, sounds and traditions ^^

    Memories will always be there... it's what you make of them that counts the most I think


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      December 16, 2007
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      I agree with you Alex
      We all need to make the most of memories and take them into your present and future x


  • quack silver member
    December 15, 2007
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    really good


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 15, 2007
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    This is really great Dear Goo luck with it in the contest

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