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~Homicide~


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Damn the death coming from sea
that swiftly comes and soothes me
The liquid frost that chills my bone
from solid hand; mercy's unknown

What I have done does haunt my past
and a future that will not last
Spilled rumors were indeed fact
but I leave this world my pride still intact

A chosen road thought out to walk
though a hell i knew would unlock
"Wake up temptation." i but say
I enjoyed the full in a new form of way

The sunset sky as my last thing to view
the meaning of life I don't try to construe.
Seas cloud my head and takes away my breath
I fly to the arms of the one called Death

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"Never regret anything in life, because at one point it was Exactly what you wanted."

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  • OOMAZZOo
    March 28, 2008

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    Well done. Very well written.
    And yes
    I agree with the msg you left in your "author notes", althou, I feel that there can be exceptions...at times.
    oOMAZZOo


  • Angel Lunarious
    December 16, 2007
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    oooooo......i likie this alot....*stares in aw*