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Let The Door Swing Open

You claim to want to know her,
Are You certain this is so?
For some on here they think she's lost
she's a dark cajun shadow.

A shadow who will hide away
From those who look to see
Until she knows that they will stay
To get to know katie

This shadow with the golden hair
And eyes of deepest brown
Born June 4 in the summer air
On a blanket on the ground.

Perhaps is why she seeks blue skys
When walls start closing in
Maybe the color she saw is why
When her life had first begin

Numbers are a passion for shadow
Although she has no favorite
She's happy to count the blocks in a row
or number the words in a write

This girl has no musical gift
Still yet Her heart does soar
Each time a cellos voice does drift
To her ears with a Bach's score

Then there is the "Coming Attractions"
That drift toward the past
"An Officer and a Gentleman"
Shall forever last

Now when it comes to TV shows
Survivor is the best
She loves to see how well they do
On each and every test

This Cajun girl just loves to cook
And would gladly feed the world
With lots of shrimp and crab and wine
Then she'll dance around and twirl~

And when she runs over to New Orleans
Fun's always there to find
Especially during Mardi Gras
It's her favorite time!

Sometimes her thoughts drift to when
to when she was but a little girl
And played with her bestest friend
The center of her world

She taught her some games back then
she can still enjoy
Like games she plays with her Master
she is His favorite toy!

she have no published works of time
And probably never will
she writes to help her stay in line
It works better than a pill

And so her spare times spent doing this
A hobby some might say
She also loves to draw and fish
And sun naked on summer days

Finding time to reads not easy
And "Sleeping Beauties Capture"
Might sound like its a little sleazy
But she's feeling such a rapture!

Tonight she's watching An American Gangster
Not really y her choosing
But trying to make the best of it
And not tossing up her cookies!

All her life she's had these words
To cover up her fears
Now she opens up and works
To let some others near.

And so today she takes a step
To show herself to You
Please know that all she ever wants
Is to bring a smile or two.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 22, 2007
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    Amazingly done. Gorgeous!

    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • daviscth silver member
    December 18, 2007
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    What a wonderful way you chose to answer these questions. Thanks for posting in my contest.


  • tomisb
    December 15, 2007

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    Delightful expression of who you are. Truly a wonderful revalation.
    Love, Tom B.


    • dark cajun shadow
      December 15, 2007
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      Thank You Master, it was written to push myself to open up a bit, no other reason, as i realize it is a pretty dreadful write...lol...but still a huge step for me. Thank You for seeing that. *hugs*

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