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I looking for him,
near and far.
But I know he's not here,
he left; he's gone.
I don't know what to do,
don't what to say.
I'm trying to follow my heart,
since there's no other way.
But I'm still here hurting,
even though it's done.
I feel like though he's not mad,
the heartache has just begun.

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  • LovelyDesire
    December 16, 2007

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    I think you should name the poem Lost or something along those lines.....i know who this is about!!! lol