i
am a kind
and humble
specimen of
humanity
out to give
more than
i receive
~~~~~
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!
Comments
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Love the title, very creative. An honest reflection from what I can see. Beautifully penned and weaved with such delicate wording.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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This is so YOU!
You have said it in a few words....
but this is how I have got to know you: A kind person always thinking of others first. Well done.
Anna.
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So Sweet....Like this...
All the best
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Very Nice
wow this is all so true and I have only known ya for a few days LOL! nice pic and is that yuour graduation pic as well wow? any ways off that this is a very well penned shortly done poem and I enjoyed reading this poem of yours. the only suggestion would to capitalize your I and otherwise your poem was great. jeep up the good work and good luck -
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Thanks for your reflections on my poem, friend. But as a reflection of my humility, I feel the small(non-capitalized) i's are in keeping.
At one time, I would not have even considered referring to myself as "i" but time and experience can be a great humbler, so perhaps unless pride is so deeply seated within--It may not be as difficult as it once was, when I felt I had something to be and to prove.
Thanks for your comments,
david
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awwww
this is good thank you for sharing and yes you are a very kind soul to many best wishes and much love
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