I can see you
Right to the core
You are all that I want
And... so much more
I can feel you
Holding me tightly
You will not let go
You are forever beside me
When you hold my hand
When you hold me tight
When you tell me you love me
I know I'm alright
But when push comes to shove
And shove knocks you down
We know in our hearts
There are three of us now
I can see you
The only one I see
Your beautiful face
Staring back at me
I can feel you
You won't leave me ever
But I feel I must ask...
Will we ever be together?
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Titles, Titles and More Titles!!! by HeavensNewestAngel.
425 points, ended January 5, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
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This is a great poem you wrote. I can relate to what you wrote here. Thank you for putting the number in the authors comment box. Best of luck in the contest
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Good poem, it flowed very nicely and I love the words you used, I think alot of people would enjoy this poem, for it tells and asks what people want to know. Great job.
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