winter is crazed
ice
creeping disarray
fractured
by a blind white
avoidance of what is frozen
failures
of lines and planes
captured and extolled
no winter is revelling
in that warmth
of struggle
Author notes
or perhaps winter is sloppy melting cheese!~)
A contest entry
- You Might Want To Try This by Dalaney.
675 points, ended December 20, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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"warmth
of struggle" its lines like this that remind me why i always come back to read you :-)
Wonderfully done,
(waiting for the thaw) :-)
~ w
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Thank you for entering this poem...
I really like it. Love, Lane
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