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i won't give up

i won't give up
i don't care
you can knock me down
while others stare

i will stand tall
and try again
till you love me
but till then

i won't give up
i don't care
you can knock me down
while others stare

i'll try till end
and try again
till you love me
but till then

i won't give up
i don't care
you can knock me down
while others stare


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  • DonSulliven
    December 17, 2007

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    I LOVE THE REPETITION IN THIS!!!
    are you going though something rite now? like with a chick?
    any ways this is great piece of work


  • HarleyHypnotize
    December 15, 2007
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    I love it