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Outline in the cement






I am the morning vesper

keeping your bright eyes alit

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Simple and stunning. You have weaved very beautiful words to describe and reflect yourself. Very nicely penned.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.