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soul crusher

they carry his coffin
the sisters of doom
eyes glowing bright  fangs barred
escorting the protectors in a herse
the throne to the riders
collecting souls of the dead
the last souls roaming
lost in the apocalypse
the war between the living and the dead
the protector of souls
riding the wheels of black to its bones
rising from the ground below
delivering souls to the other side
fire pumping through their veins
dealing for the grim reaper
deaths most wanted list
riders of the apocalypse

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  • Silenced one
    December 17, 2007

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    dark

    I like it... no i LOVE it. It is beautifully chaotic. WHen I read it I think of the wraiths on Lord of the rings. Imagery is amazing on this piece. Keep it up LF.

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