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What Do You See?

I'm the faint shadow
In the distance


I'm the whisper
In your ear


I'm your creation

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Very public, I don't feel personal. Very simple and pointing towards creators - like mother or 'God' but
    I don't feel it describes who you are, just what you are. But beautifully done.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • crimsondew
    December 16, 2007
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    Love this approach..there is depth here..People are very much who we perceive them to be....