My eyes become strawberry swirls
My feet no longer touching the ground
I'm told to stop and smell the techni-color roses
Inhale the sugary sweet air
Take a swim in the neon ocean
You look so beautiful underneath black lights
It highligts those jade eyes perfectly
Those hands could take me places
Places where these fairies sprinkle their magic
A kaleidoscope of glittering stars
We could be dancing in the moonlight
Or in the presence of epileptic strobe lights
Levitation never felt so blissful
As in the zenith of your kiss
It never felt like love making
Until the elevation was tantamount
To the petal-covered sessions in bath water
Candy-coated kisses, you're my sugar rush
And I'm thinking about daffodils
At the peak of springs rebirth
Unfolding and stretching for the sun
I am unfolding
Taking in your embrace that swallows my heart like music
They told me to stop and smell the techni-color roses
They always did remind me of you...
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This was very sweet. I love the fantasy you put in it. Thanks for entering!
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A beautiful write filled with great colour and imagery.
It's easy to read and brings home the desired effect. The thought of a colourful relationship born of new life given. well done. -
This is a beautifully penned piece, the imagery and comparisons are spectacular and really draws in my attention excellent job and thanks for entering
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thanks alot dude!
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this is really sweet i love the way you made a poem about roses into one about love. good luck ♥
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why thank you ^.^ I really did have fun writing it. Even if I don't win at least I did something productive today
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