Oh! What a tangled web we weave
deaf men hear and blind men see
but no miracle is there, no faith
left in the shadows of dying grace
Oh! What a tangled web we weave
when the iron curtain is felt with pain
destructive souls in a world so vague
the flesh has been mercilessly slain
Oh! What a tangled web we weave
when children don't play sinlessly
what we expect for innocence, is just a lie
hiding in the mask of a stereotype
Author notes
This was a poem done with other people from my poetry enrichment course at the college. We were given a line from a famous poem, and then we each had to add one line to it and pass it to the next person.
Please tell me what you think
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Really nice. And the unity of it is amazing considering that it had multiple author. Really great!
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nice
Well written. I loved the rythm and repetition. Good job! -
Very well writen. I liked the rhythm and repetition, it worked very well.
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