I am a mother and wife
whose heart is full of love
that I give freely.
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be nice!
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Beautifully crafted into simplicity. Once a mother - always a lover, you have directed this to not only reflect you but many mothers we admire. Beautiful.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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This beautifully describes who you are. Because u do give freely.
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Excellent my dear
Yes their are wings a mother carries upon their backs which only a child does see . Give them love and teach them well and you shall see their wings yourself
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your whast the whole words needs to be
this was a warming to my heart
i love your last line in this poem
wish the whole world would learn to realy love
great poem
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Yes...This could just be me...like it!
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i love you mum huggggggggs you tight
i love your poem to
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yep...guess this says it all...food for thought...last line....one I give freely? whatta ya think?
mal
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Yes you are all off this and you have a beautiful heart of gold thank you for sharing this with me and goodluck in the contest much love
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Thank you so much, Sis. Much love to always.
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