I am
About half the person
I want to become
In a list
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
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That is so true. I can relate because I am never satisfied with where I am and what I am. There are always imporvement to be made

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judyjudyjudy
Thank you so much for your comments. I just consider myself a work in progress.
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Short & simple. A nice reflection on yourself
I love the direction you took this and hope you become all you want to be 
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.

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DwellingInDarkness
Thank you for your comments and for hosting this contest.
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should we call you shorty? lol...still...you can be whole...guess you can say...almost there...
mal
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Malabu
Thank you for your comments. They are appreciated.
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