I am a dark yet
FRAGILE
semi-inspired
hope-filled
DREAMER
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hope you like it
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good piece that offers the self - dark, aye, are we not all so? fragile, that too we all are in these realms of madness we label life. ah a semi
why not go fully lol 
hope-filled is good, hope is a great light. dreamer, yes, that too we all delve into. i will say who i am in response. 
Dreamer Poet Artist
Dreamer, poet, artist.
Madman - sane in moments.
Foolish in wisdom.
Insecure - secured by heart.
Emotive, destructive of self.
Teary, smiley, funny - not.
Stupid. Ugly. Fat. Thin. King.
Jester. Waster. Withered.
Chasing. Dancing inside invisible rain.
Awkward. Graceful. Aware, but dull.
Colourful greys. Thief. Lover. Hater.
Kind. Brother. Smoker.
A lot more to me. Hello. How are you?
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thanks so much for your kind comment..support from other writers means so much to me..and Hello...I am fine..ummm...ps..also forgot illy..that most of the time I am too..
blessings..
namaste..
r
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WONDERFUL!!! I cherish who you are...all you are! What you believe and what you stand for. My sister, my friend...my blessed one.
Blessed be!!!
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wow this is a very good write hun
short and sweet.
well done auntie keep up the good work
~Angelic Princess~
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Only semi-inspired? I do like the opposites that are juxtaposed in this piece, dark yet fragile, etc.
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Nawr, simple and sensitive. Very well crafted in such small echoes. I love the direction and honesty that you took yourself.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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I think its good...though deep instead of dark? was my thoughts...but dont mind me...
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Neat
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