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Damnation

"Now bow your heads and pray"

I'm not used to this submission
the feeling of giving one's self
of letting it all out

I'm not used to this pleading
the sense of disgrace
because I couldn't do it myself

I'm not used to this wanting
the need for something more
than the silence I recieve

But I'll be damned if I don't listen

Please tell me what you think

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 16, 2007
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    Great!