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Who is it that speaks to the ears of the beholder?

I am the differences and the similarities.
The nothing and the something.
I am me.

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this is a contest entry.... when the contest is over i'll make it longer.

A contest entry

What do the little voices in your head say?

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    A well crafted piece, brilliant imagery. Not 100% on the lack of certainty but that just adds another part to the weaved imagery of you.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • Malabu
    December 15, 2007
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    and reading this you are contrary contrived...
    wonderful pen
    Mal


  • photay.poetry
    December 15, 2007
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    nice.


    • Demmy-Defect
      December 15, 2007
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      thanks... i'll promise it'll be longer by the time christmas is over. i think the contest will be over by then.

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