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Ticking

I am the second hand
sweeping round and round
going sixty miles an hour

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Intriguing
    Love the imagery is such simplicity. Am a bit weary of repeating words in such little word limit but definitely an intriguing write on yourself. Nicely crafted.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 16, 2007
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    great imagery! Excellent take on the prompt Best of luck


  • crimsondew
    December 15, 2007
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    Like the last line....good !


  • Malabu
    December 15, 2007

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    I like this....though the last line might be better in my opinion...twenty-four hours a day? what do you think?
    Mal