Tears Steaming Down My Face
Splattering on this paper of mine.
because of these feelings of
being useless and unloved.
this is painful to write
and not have tears.
death is easier to think of
then being wrong.
a tear drop splattered on my paper today
because of you
and my life
memories dont lie.
its all my fault
but that razor is looking nicer
than ever
and faces are getting darker and more evil
gun in one hand
pills in the other.
my tears are coming faster
youre not coming back
i have no will to make things different
a tear splatters on my paper, again today
come save me please.
i cant be on my own.
not many more
im tied of being alone
i smile and make everyone
feel loved
no one does that for me
a tear splatters on my paper.
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yes, i agree with giftedpsychosis.
boys smell weird. well, most of them. ;p
I DONT SMELL WEIRD!
i love you shelbo <3
[pronounced bo, not boo]
pleeeease don't feel like this and think you have no one to turn to. i know people talk a lot. but this is in stone. you + sad = sarah's phone aring-alinging. seriously babe. SARAHS HERE =] and i will chuck that stone at anyone who lies about being there for you.
ps-- sorry i wasn't paying attention the other day. really really really.
<33333
pss- its a kickass poemage tho =]
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ily lol :]
and i totally know who's there for me and..I LOOOVE YOU PEACHYYYY
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I LOVE YOU!!!!!
DONT FEEL THIS WAY EEVVEERR!!
YOU DONT NEED A BOY!!
BOYS ARE STUPID AND LIE AND KIND OF STINK!
RELY ON YOUR GIRLS!!
ME!!!!!!
Great Poem!!!
SOOOOOO SAD!!!
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haah thanks :]
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Copied it how?
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i think used for inspiration. check it
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this poem brought tears to my eyes. It was well written. i can relate to how you feel. I feel the same way. you are a good writer keep up the good work.
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wow well i like this poem alot too. Its very visual.
a tear splattere on my paper, again today
you might want to remove the extra e on splatter
other wise this poems perfect
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