I'm lost in the rain,
I'm cold and I'm wet,
It's getting darker slowly,
I can't find my way out yet.
I'm trucking through the puddles,
They're up to my ankles now,
If I ever get out of the rain,
I don't know freaking how.
I am swimming in my sorrows,
I still can't find my way,
I'm getting weak and I can't float,
I sink; drifting away.
Because I'm lost in this rain,
At first it was mist,
But as I waited and it grew,
Then I couldn't even resist.
I've drowned in it and now I'm gone,
I died in all this rain,
The only good thing that came of it all,
Is as did I; so did the pain.
Author notes
38. I'm lost in the rain
(2) rain
A contest entry
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38. I'm lost in the rain
Comments
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touching
This is definitely a very sad poem! it was beautiful tho... but filled with sorrow!
I could feel the pain in your lines... It was just so depressing!
i notice one thing in many people... they usually involve rain when they are depressed... but to me, rain is a form of joy! it brings back purity to earth and my heart! But this was definitely an entertaining poem! Like it very much!
Thank you very much for entering my contest! I wish you all the best of luck in my contest!
Much love always,
Ranji
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Thats so sad! Very well done! I Love your poetry. its so different from one to the next. Love it
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This is a stunning piece! Extremely sad...but magnificently done! Good Luck!
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This is a great poem you wrote. I feel like this sometimes. Thank you for putting the number in your authors comment. Good luck in my contest
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