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With you

One whisper,
touch,
a moment
could always
take
my breath away,
With you
it's
Different.
Delicate.
I want to
touch you
softly,
feel
your lips
on mine
nibble gently.
Laugh with you,
Stay with you,
close my eyes.
Just breathe with you.

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  • Croucc
    January 28, 2008

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    Very beautiful write. I love your views of those close moment with your special someone. Nice work!

    Keep up writing!

    Blessed Be!


  • crimsondew
    January 22, 2008
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    just breathe you...got all the feelings right here..


  • Restless and True
    December 17, 2007
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    This reminded me of my boyfriend. It made me smile and sad at the same time.

    Amazing write.

  • Just4u
    December 16, 2007
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    very sensual...

    Happy Holidays...

    Hugs...Eddy