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Go Get Em, Tiger.

     My feet are pulsing slowly,
   My heart is pulsing quick,
 My cleats are jumping up and down,
My sweat; starting to stick.

I kick the ball.

           I stalk the prey,

                      Goes right in,
                                I got the goal.

 

                Got em, tiger.

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  • Naridill
    December 30, 2007

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    Love the ending -

    simple and stunning, you have created a beautiful piece and simple metaphor.

    Thanks for entering
    Much luck


  • musik-freek
    December 15, 2007
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    hehe thats cool nice form