The fires of Mandingo rage within my loins.
We have captured the wind beneath our wings
to fly.
On the passionate Isles of grandeur I lay upon your aching breast.
Your nipples whisper subtle remedies of love
that allure my desire.
I caress your mellons of sweet majestic madness and suckle them with reckless abandon.
You quiver and quake with cosmic ferver as
your hands secure my ass and we begin love.
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To hold me
To feel the beat of my heart through the
very hands that mold love into my silhouette
that reaps of astounding ecstacy
at your fingertips
as I lick you slowly into blissful treasures
of which I've buried
deep within the hollows of my fantasies
while rain clouds form
bringing a soothing mist upon me of your touch
capture the essence as my sweet juice flows
into indigo river delights
take me...as I am
here for full advantage
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I am indebted to love
seeing you laying here naked
freely surrendering yourself to me.
My heart is an open flame
that flickers in the darkness.
With it I shall arouse every
erotic instinct inside you.
Feel the sweet splendor of my kisses.
As they bathe your fervent flesh
with the ashes of my dripping libido.
*****
Seeing Love in the reflection of your eyes
is more than enough
a priviledge that has completed me
My spirit is lifted
while I deliberate in pure simplicity
as you fulfill my soul in soft moans
with a single tear
that dangles near the edge of my chin
in Happines...
nothing has ever felt like this as I tatto your name in my mind
of Dreams that have come to Life
while we do this all over again
Author notes
Hope that you will enjoy the Sunrise of Passion
Written on a spur during a conversation today....
December 15, 2007
In a list
A contest entry
- What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hey this is really beautiful! the flow was very smooth and i really enjoyed it! thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you so very much
for your time and comment.
ephiphany♥
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Lady E....Words of Fire
This is a beautiful collab. spur of the moment is the best kind, you capture the mood, magic, and passsion.
Excellent balance between the two of you...each section flow into the next with a graceful ease...just lovely......novy
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Thanks Godmother novy
I appreciate your comment, I'm sure darell will also, he is a great writer and this was on a spur....
Thank you so much
Lady e
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Rich with metaphoric visions of expression regarding sensuality. Great writing sis. This was one of your best!!
~Inc."
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Thank You MeMe
Hey gotta show you sumthin....hit me on the IM
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the fires of mandingo?!!?! What a way to start it off. The back and forward shows the beauty of a female and male perspective. It really shows the way the subtle and aggressive view can be revealed. I like the way it is clearly shown.
Mykeee
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LOL
Keee....u a mess!
Yes, it's obvious of the controversy, huh?
Glad you stopped by to read this. Appreciate you always.
ephiphany
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If this was written on a spur, I can only imagine the depth you hold once you really put your heart in it. Love's Sunrise is truly a remarkable admission confessed with passion. Bravo!
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Thank you my sis
I appreciate your comment on this piece.
Yes, it was generated by a conversation with my friend, darell this afternoon so we decided to Collaborate.
Glad you liked it.
ephiphany
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this is a very beautiful poem that you have written. I enjoyed reading this very much. thank you for sharing this with me. you have a great talent.
kat
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Thank you sis
I appreciate you stopping by and reading this.
ephiphany
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Very beautiful write, Phiph. I liked the part of tattooing the name of a lover in a person's mind. Seemed very metaphorical and made me think of how a person may be thinking of a person over the course of a day. Keep writing.
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Thank you
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What can I say absolutely beautiful
sensual, passionate and full of love *sigh*
A wonderful collab
Love to you both
~sugar~
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Thanks sugar...
love you much
piff
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Very Deep Poetry!
Remember those days well! Good vivid pictures came into my mind. Good write.
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Thanks kenneth
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always lovely and sensual!
this is amazing you two....perfect collab
Tasha
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Thanks sis
maybe I will do a movie one day, huh?
Lubb you...enjoy your Partay tonite
Piff
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i hope you mean WRITE a movie, not ...ahmmmm....be in it hehehehe
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ahem....
never know with me sis
Just kidding, I meant write one
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You never cease to amaze me...
Every time I read anything that you have written piff, it's breathtakingly beautiful
Always with such perfect backgrounds
to accompany your words throughout each line...
The way you write, is so unique and softly sensual
Everytime I read your work its a new experiance...
The only woman I know that can make a
new masterpiece everytime...
You always put all your heart and soul into everything you write and I admire you so much for that quality...
This was truly an amazing piece that you have penned here...
Beautiful work written by a beautiful person inside and out 
Much love as always
XxLisaJazminexX
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awwww
yall know how mushy I get
I owe all my hard work to you my dear friend and so many others who believed in me...even in my not so good times.
I can't help but to always be "Me" it's all I know how to do...and LOVE
Thank you LJ...for the inspiration in your comments.
Much love and respect to as well,
Ephiphany
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This is awesome! Gorgeous piece you
two have written together. I love the
way that you put this one together.
Very sensual and passionate are your
words behind this beautiful sunset
background. Well done and keep up the
wonderful work here! Always a pleasure
to read your work!
Jeremy0826
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Awww....
thank you so much "J" the pleasure is having you support my work all in the same. Yes, darell and I have become good friends, he is remarkable and this was his idea during a conversation from this morning.
I'm sure he'd appreciate you too.
Love you much my friend.
Ephiphany
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