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Daddy Daddy

Daddy Daddy you gotta go
Mommy don't like you no more
You gotta pack your back
n move away Don't try to
get her back,Shes Done wit
you Daddy You gotta get that
throu your head.

Daddy Daddy why did you do it?
Fight with her day n night
Call her a slut n then the
next day u say sorry n have
sex wit her and start all
over the next day. Tell her
you love her n have her come
back to you
 
Daddy Daddy you dont treat
her right you dont say how
nice she looks or kiss her
everyday. You don't take her
out for dinner, not at night,
not ever...how do you think that
makes her feel?

Daddy Daddy after all the SH*t
you put her through you expect her
to be alright? Think again after
your done yellin at her your"kids"
get to go n see if shes alright!

Daddy daddy did you know
one night me n you got in a fight
im not gonna be all Daddy Daddy
im sorry stop please cause you
didn't do sh*t to me n Im Not
Sorry for Anythin I said to you!

Daddy Daddy did you know that
once upon a time we used to be
a happy family? Then when we got
older your attitude got worse
then our family started to
fall apart but you didn't care.

Daddy Daddy I hate to say you
got no heart you got no love
...not from us cause we lived
wit you for to long. Dont say
sorry cause we all know ur not,
were Smart.

Daddy Daddy I feel bad that were
fallin apart but you did this to
yourself,I hope you didn't
want a perfect life.

Daddy Daddy were outta here,
dont even try to get us to come
back into ur NON-perfect life.

Daddy Daddy I thought I loved you.....

Author notes

Got in a fight last night so I wrote this....

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  • camus gold member
    February 3

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    Gosh, your life has been traumatic as your poem conveys so clearly. I would like to believe that now that your dad has exited your life, you may find some peace and love. I sure hope so, my friend.


  • lovexxxgirl
    January 30
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    omg that is so nice iii really like it


  • Hyakkimaru Nyktos
    January 1, 2008
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    Emotional alot


  • XStuckInANightmareX
    December 15, 2007

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    This is really good hun.
    I love it.
    I'm sorry that you are your dad fight.
    Theres not a day in my life where me n mom don't fight.
    I get along better with me dad.
    But if you ever need to talk hun I'm here.
    You know that and have always known that.
    Love ya chica.
    Keep your head up.


  • ConfusedintheDark
    December 15, 2007

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    Wow

    Hey beautiful I hope ur ok and if anythin happens let me kno. I love the poem but u kno i'm here for u. *kisses u*

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