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Fallen (true story)

my life just ended
and nobody cared
everything inside just died
and all they could do was glare.

cursed and pathetic
is what they're calling me
"god hates you -
how else could this be?!!"

i lost our only heir
whom grew inside this whore
2 months later he died
and then they said no more...

thank Hell that you're here
to catch me and give me life
it was either that or death and
i would have used your knife!

so bare me with no child
to curse and raise as mine
can't seem to try again
death will only be another time,

my life just ended
along with the child's beating heart
i hope we never seperate
because Kyle, you're my other part!!!

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  • Dead Yet Alive
    March 6, 2008

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    that is so fucking sad. i know what it is like to go through that. my friends older sister had to take me to go get an abortion. i cried for ever every time i saw a baby knowing that because of my mother i could not keep my child. i know i'm only 12 and i had know other choice. but i loved that baby, it was to a part of me that i will never get back. i love the lines 21 and 22. that is very true, the only people that could understand that are the people that have their child ripped out of their life. without my baby, i, too, am nothing but a piece of dust.

  • Peplin0523
    March 5, 2008

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    hey sexay nice poem, but very sad i still feel bad about all that cant even imagine how you felt wish i coulda been there instead of here in ghetto va. ya know i loves ya!!!

  • on-bloody-heels
    February 26, 2008

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    This is really tough to go thru. Believe I know. I had to be there when AJ had her miscarriage. Its rough to go thru something like this but you're a strong woman and can make it thru and I know that you're currently with child now and that is awesome. Trying is all you need to do and so I wish you and your husband the best of luck. You both deserve that child that you carry. So good luck and Blessed Be (tho you are satanist). Take care and be safe.

    Bri


  • ItalianPride09
    December 18, 2007
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    omg tasha would love to have read this she will adventually shesin the marines right now though!!!

  • ItalianPride09
    December 18, 2007
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    omg this poem is amazing tasha would of loved to read it shes in the marines right now though!!!


  • possessedgurl666
    December 17, 2007

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    wow

    its patrick and thats really deep just keep trying and eventually u will have one i know u will! well as ur son i love ya and i hope u can have one soon well ill ttyl call me sun! bye

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