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Felling The Unreal

Memories perched

on branches of my veins
hurt.
Where is my axe?

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  • Tangled Angle
    December 22, 2007
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    did you mean "feeling"?

    i guess this is okay. i like the imagine, but it's kind of emo.


    • Lyndon gold member
      January 16, 2008
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      No.

      I think "felling" is the term for chopping down a tree.
      "Axe" is the last word.


    • Raazi
      December 23, 2007
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      I meant felling. Read it again, and you'll know why.

      • Tangled Angle
        December 23, 2007
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        haha
        my bad
        i looked it up and it says felling: chopping down a tree.

        interesting

        i never thought felling was a word.


  • Tangled Angle
    December 22, 2007
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    are you serious?

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