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[ Oh santa the basterd ]

Oh santa the basterd
Is coming for you
To set your skin on fire
Oh his sweet desire!.

His claws are sharp
His eyes are dark
To slide in behind you
gut you like a carp

He can see you
but you cant see him
He knows you can feel him
your blood running thin
Waiting just a while so you settle down
Gonna slice face,happy as a clown
When you are home
on christmas eve
He is gonna wait
for everyone to leave

When you lie asleep
curlded in your bed
He will start on your skin:
peeling shred by shred

when you are awake,
tied to the wall
thats when the fun starts
thats his little ball

your toe nails pulled
as well as your teeth
your eyelids sewed
so you cant peep

viniger poured on
rubbed in deep
He will start to laugh
when you start to weep...

Author notes

to the tune of Christmas Symposia-The Baptist Version

A contest entry

have a gay xmas all

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  • Violent Serenity
    April 21, 2008

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    YAY! a christmas story i can tell all the kiddies finally! ... good write cat leader.. keep it up! *tackles*


  • Brokenangels
    January 16, 2008
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    Very dark but I still loved it <3


  • hopelessly-broken
    January 4, 2008

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    so dark and disturbing but totally amazing! well written.

    keep it up, u have talent

    love HB
    xoxoxox


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 16, 2007
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    great re~write hellishly dark. Best of luck to you in the contest


  • angeleror
    December 15, 2007

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    this is really good....i take it you dont like christmas much.....gud luck surviving this year's christmas and all the others yet to come


  • Dmonik
    December 15, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry, I'll read it thoroughly upon judging. Just one thing, do you mind putting the original tune in your AN please.


  • NyteShade
    December 15, 2007
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    Thanks for entering. Good luck.

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