My heart aches
I miss your presence
I seek your hand
I miss your voice
You're not there
I miss your touch
Be honest and tell me what you think.
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Few words that relay a strong emotional response...great poetry!!!!
Az
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It seems like this poem doesn't really end there, but I really like what u have. So much sadness and longing. You can really feel it. It makes me wondered did u lose someone to death or maybe a break up or a lost friendship. Anyway, great write and really good emotion.
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That is so sad. I hope you heart stops aching.
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this poem has a feel of being unfinished i love whats there though but i feel that it could do with anouther verse
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i love this poem. it iis sad, but very good at the same time. i think you should extend this poem, but thats up to you. what you have here is amazing and well written.
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