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Rain

I fall asleep
Dreaming of dancing in the rain
In the middle of a cobble stone street
Surrounded by blossoming
Red and white roses

The pitter patter
Of the rain falling around me
Is all I hear
As I look up at the afternoon sky

I try to catch a raindrop
On my tongue, like snow
Twriling and spinning
My jacket spinning
And floating about

The puddles look like
Little lakes with
Rivers connecting them
To one another

I imagine I'm in a boat
Floating down one of those
Miniture rivers
As I step in and about them

I wake to hear the soft
Thuds of rain on my window
The dream not yet leaving


Author notes

I did number 6 and number 9. I hope its ok that I did more then one choice. I couldn't really pick one. I am going to use some of your other choices as insperation too. I really liked them. Anyway, I want to be your AP sister.

Eclipsexoxo

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