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The Cling to Our Dreams

Blinking against dawn,
We cling to dreams, each other,
Still warm in love's arms.

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The cling to dreams,
As we awake,
Maybe someday,
Into one.

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    December 15, 2007
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    Sentimental and strung together well
    with great word choices as well as font.


  • azure85 gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    Blinking against dawn,
    We cling to dreams, each other,
    Still warm in love's arms.

    Very nice haiku about love, and written in a lovely traditional form. Thank you so much!