i love you
by: Fr0z3n_Ch1ld
The ocean pulls me closer
and whispers in my ear
the destinies I've chosen
are all becoming clear
the currents have their say
the time is drawing near
It washes me away
It makes me disappear
and I'll desend from grace
in arms of under tow
I will take my place
int the great below
I listened to the words he said
but in his voice I heard decay
The plastic face forced portray
insides left cold and grey
There is a place that still remains
it eats the fear
it eats the pain
the sweetest price he'll have to pay
the day the whole world went away
I asked God for a minute
He gave me a day
I asked God for a flower
He gave me a bouquet
I asked God for True Love
and He gave me that too
I asked God for an Angel
and he gave me You
A contest entry
- WRITE! by xorandomxo.
800 points, ended December 16, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hows this one for PG?
Comments
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I love this
this was awesome very very expressful
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WOW!
Very unique!! Best of luck in this contest!!!
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