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river

the river of blood which i go down,
its a solem and lonley place.
where i wear my bloodforsaken crown,
with tears upon my face.

Cry

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i geuss i was just thinking about something like my grandpa because it just came to me

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 29, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Strong emotions in this vivid write

    Best of luck in the contest
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda