Look at me my Darling
What do you see?
A weakling who can't do anything?
Or a strong person who holds everything?
Do you see a Queen or a beggar?
Tell me what you see!
Tell me what you see!
Because it matters to me!
I love you so tell me...
Look at me my Darling
Love me with all your heart
I don't know whether it's hurt
Or flowing with love never falling
Never breaking apart because...
I have you to see me!
Tell me what you see!
Tell me what you see!
Because it matters to me!
I love you so tell me...
Tell me what you see in me
Do you like me for me?
Or is my Perfection all you see?
Do you hate me for me?
Are my flaws obsessed over?
Oh baby just tell me please.
Because I need to know
I need to know,I care what you think.
Tell me what you see!
Tell me what you see!
Because it matters to me!
I love you so tell me...
So that's what you See
When you look at me-
That's what you think...
Author notes
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What's your first impresion?
Comments
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This is a very deep poem. It wrestles with problems faced by many people and yet ignored by most. I really like the repetition, it pulls it together.
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Thank you! ^-^
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So painful and full of aching here, the war and confusion of not knowing the truth, the feelings and the suffering of thoughts...
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lyrical but not particularly forward. nothing against it. it just doesnt strike me.
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I like this to sweety you have done a fine job with this one thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love always
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AWW THANKS AS ALWAYS! ^-^
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