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7 Missing you, I'm all alone
3 my own fault
7 Who can tell what's to happen?

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  • Rose Darkest Night
    March 24, 2008

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    Such a sad message, in such a short few lines. You did great with this, and I could feel every shread of pain you feel of missing as you left me wanting more with the short haiku above.

    Great job! I loved it!

    -Keni


  • azure85 gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    7 Missing you, I'm all alone
    3 my own fault
    7 Who can tell what's to happen?

    This is a very introspective haiku, it is very good. Thank you so much!