To Bianca and Dad,
Yes you were right ‘I’m the black sheep’. The one who makes all the mistakes and disappoints you in every way.
I’m a screw up and so I’m leaving.
I called Mum, she wired me the money.
Bianca, my sister I’m sorry. I really didn’t want to do it like this, it’s just I heard you and dad talking…..
I’ll miss you!
So I guess a job for me, and I will live at Mum’s.
Who knows?
we’ll see.
Love you guys,
Bye.
Love Cindy.
Author notes
Option seven, write a letter of your running away to your loved ones
This didnt happen but I suppose it is how I envision it to be
Bianca is my Twin sister, I left her name in it to express the emotion it should and I feel does hold
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A contest entry
- JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
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Comments
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Thank you for this original entry. I like that you stood out from the others and chose option seven. I think it would have been deeper if it had been personal but no worries. Still good. Thanks again and good luck.
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Your expression of the pain and disappointment that would be felt in this situation is subtle, flowing just beneath the surface. Best wishes to you in the contest sweetness.
Mum
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