Feel
Poignant and Surreal
Never
Let the beauty
Steal away
A contest entry
- In only 10 words ~ say it all... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended December 16, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent poetry and a good advice to other poets. Clarity of word choices and even a forceful command to 'never let the beauty steal away'...this is wonderfully rich in it's brevity and power. Peace, Rhonda
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her heart refuses to move; true
more then irony? I'm not sure I now the exact feeling of poignant. It this kind of like, "I love her to death". That's where it takes me. But your not aloud to feel that much; right (my attempt at humor).
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wow!
very good wordplay here. The poem actually made me "feel" and it had a creepy yet firm feeling to it.
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Thank you, transit, for reading and commenting. I hope you never stop feeling, and writing!
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A wonderful message within few words. thanks so much for sharing this... x love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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