ghost white sentinels
overtaken at frozen dawn
-trees in the hoar frost
In a list
A contest entry
- What Dreams May Come .... With Nurse Chilly by Cat.
2000 points, ended December 30, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The hills have eyes... apparently the trees do too! Chilling little Haiku...
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Love the hoar frost scenes that this brings to mind - that winter wonderland appearance of fantasy and flight....
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a stunning Ku Gary, but like Mary, I don't get the fanasty element pouring through... maybe you could have done a run of ku's to get the feel of it?? I dunno
but many many thanks for entering... and good luck too..
G.x
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while i think this is a stunning bit of haiku-
i wonder about the fantasy element the contest
expressed?
i am not sure i find that in this
i do love the hoar frost both here and while walking in the woods..
thanks so much for the entry
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Perhaps, "Cat", I didn't elaborate on the "spectors" who inhabit this little poem...but they were inspired by my predawn drive to work the day I saw your contest posted . A very heavy hoar frost gave me the impression that the countryside was overtaken with mysterious observers.Your poetry challenge brought them back to my mind.
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yes.. i like that- i see it
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Excellent job again! Hope you get a gold out of this one! Thanks for sharing!!
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i love haikus! it's nice to see one in a contest
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