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One Night of Love

.   .   .   .

in pre-dawn hour

soon sun will shower

our sandy shore

Author notes

Springboard line is "a little bit more".

A contest entry

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  • Anna Emkah
    December 16, 2007

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    Nicely done Ron.
    And you even got an HM for it.
    Wow!!! Anna.


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 16, 2007

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    This is lovely poetry, Ron... like water over sand... the glow of love ... Not often I see you writing these short ones, but then, you are a poet!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 16, 2007

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    Very creative indeed! Expressive and meaningful in so few words. Thanks for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.

  • ecrivain01
    December 15, 2007
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    Very nice ...

    haiku.


  • leo2
    December 15, 2007

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    The title put my mind in motion. The ten word hint fleshed out the rest of the story. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • Lyndon gold member
      December 15, 2007
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      Thank you Leo

      I am unused to such short pieces and had to squeeze at the neurons.

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