Hold me close,
don't let go,
I'll want you forever.
Author notes
For a contest prompt was: A little bit more.
later in life I might elaborate on it. Cause rules said '10 words only'
So yeah leave a comment if u wish! they are appreciated!!
A contest entry
- In only 10 words ~ say it all... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended December 16, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For a contest.
Comments
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Amazing!!
This is beautiful! I love this! I think that this is truely the best one I had read so far!! It's beautiful! I feel this way about my fiancé. Not ever wanting him to let me go, or I'm afraid I may die! Beautiful! (yes I know I already said that lol), I am going to book mark this one for sure!! (hugs)♥
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Thanks :]
I'm glad you liked it.
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Simply stated and truly sincere. Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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You done a great job with just 10 words sweetie!!! Sometimes a few words is all you need to get your point across. Job well done
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