The death arrives
Glass is shattered
An' all is over
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A little bit more.
A contest entry
- In only 10 words ~ say it all... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended December 16, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can you get something out of it?
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thanks so much!
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why glass shatters when death arrives.. death can be freedom, death can be punishment, death can be anything that we dont wnat to end liked ur write
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very nice. good work. very dark and profound
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Deep and sincerely profound. Thanks for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Wow...packs a punch..excellent, best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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whoa!! powerful!!
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