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Poesy




... irises of garden defoliate,
... kisses of platonic ardor,
passion penetrates.









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~spiritualangel~

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 16, 2007

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    Such creative wording using imagery and depth. Thanks for sharing this... x love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Sandygram
    December 15, 2007

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    Good Morning, You have penned a very beautiful poem. Your three lines are amazing. The imagery you created is stunning. Thank you for sharing with us. Take care, Sandy


  • SweetLeaf
    December 15, 2007
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    oo


  • SweetLeaf
    December 15, 2007
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    wow