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Stay with me
one last kiss
don't ever let go

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  • Cat gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    the seeking, the imploring- the
    letting down of the guard dog which we all become- very nicely written

    congrats on bronze

    m


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 16, 2007

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    Truly expressive and sincere in so few words. Thanks for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    December 15, 2007
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    Lovely

    piff


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    a wonderful feeling of the love is here showing this love as a strength of the soul..You are quite deep while showing your heart..I love this piece..Well done...


  • SweetLeaf
    December 15, 2007
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    awwww. this is sweet! good luck!!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 15, 2007
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    mmmmmmmmm love it!


  • transit
    December 15, 2007
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    wow!

    such elegance and love expressed in such few words. beautiful work here. I like the irony and the wordplay.

    It seems as if she is asking for one last kiss but then, she wants him to saty with her forever and not leave. very nicely expressed. best of wishes in the contest!

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