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Moments in time

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“I am content
to take this one moment
at a time…”
,
for soon the golden thread
alike violin’s pluck
will release pain’s affliction.

“I am content
to take this one moment
at a time…”
,
as its pause offers thought
alike artist’s touch
on life’s lingering collage.

“I am content
to take this one moment
at a time…”
,
as its silence provides reflection
alike beggar’s yearning
for benediction soulfully sought.

“I am content
to take this one moment
at a time…”
,
for its offering gives time
alike altar’s sanctity
for praise with spirit-filled heart.

“I am content
to take this one moment
at a time…”
,
for soon the golden thread
alike harp’s stroke
will guide flight to City of Gold.

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  • myrataal silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    I am SO GLAD I decided to read your Gold Entries!

    How on EARTH did I miss this? Wondrous work! Congratulations, Friend!

    I love how you always make the transcending steps from stanza to stanza: self awareness towards awareness of Self. Perfect poetry ... and spiritual refinement by a beautiful soul.

    Love
    Myra


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    for soon the golden thread
    alike harp’s stroke
    will guide flight to City of Gold.

    Ah ..what a beauty of the soul is here..I love the enchanatings of your soul here..well done...


    • FransB gold member
      December 26, 2007
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      I am honoured to have won this award from you. Frans.


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    "as its pause offers thought
    alike artist’s touch
    on life’s lingering collage."

    This is a tender, poignant penning, Poet. All we really CAN do is "take this one moment at a time…" No one is guaranteed a tomorrow, & Life is far too brief & precious as it is. Good luck in the contest. Wanda