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I Feel Nothing

as the blade opens my skin
i feel nothing
as i cut franticly
i feel nothing
again and again
i feel nothing
as i sit and try to cry
i feel nothing

why am i so dead inside
why can i feel no happiness
why only pain
and even than it isn't real
its all in my head

as i sit here and try to figure it out
i feel nothing
as i wonder thew life
i feel nothing

if only someone knew the way i feel
like the world has ended
and i was left here to rot
like hell is the real realm
and there is no heaven
like everyones lafing

and standing over my grave
i should end it all
and find out for sure
if i really feel nothing

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  • J McSANE
    March 18, 2008

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    this is really good man ,it make good lyrics.
    I kinda knew some1 who culd relate to this so i love it. It aint to long which i like.Peace JesseSANE


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    December 16, 2007
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    Tim this is insane, and as Adam said, this hopefully isnt the reality of what you are going through, I want to appologize to you for the way I had acted the other day while you were on the phone with him. I shouldnt have said fuck you both. We are here for you man....


  • chyld of the shadow
    December 16, 2007

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    motha fuck damn......................

    damn timmy the tooth... this shit is fuckin deep. i really dont understand why but noone ever does. i hope this isnt something you really feel. if so, itll change when you come back home. i will help you get thru whatever hard time you may have. you bein my homie, i cant let these thoughts fill your head. hopefully this is just a poem. in that case, it deserves a million applauses. this is an absolutey beautiful poem. i truly like the way you use words. i bet if i broke a bong over your head you'd feel it.lol. well anyway keep up the good work. and your head, keep that up to. i luv ya bro. youll get thru this. me and donna are here for you whenever you need us. you can count on that for sure. anything i cant say she can. again keep your head up, mothafuckdamn.lol. this guy | has no fuckin idea....
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  • ley527
    December 15, 2007
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    i love this poem......i can relate to it 150%