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In Your arms

 

 

We sit beside the beautiful waterfall,

Surrounded by tall cypress trees.

There is the sounds of birds in the distance,

Music of nature is played on the rocks below.

 

 

There we hold each other close,

As we listen to her soothing song.

A cool breeze blows through the trees,

Then you lay a soft kiss upon my cheek.

 

 

Birds singing,

To Mother Nature’s music.

And I am in your arms,

What else is there.

 

 

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FOR MY HETANE AND OUR SPECIAL PLACE.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 22

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    wonderful

    I just love the detail work, and the nature in this poem. Wonderful flow of words. Very much a pleasure to read your work. Thanks for sharing,.


    • freespirit51
      February 22
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      Golden eyes 25

      Thanks so much for your very kind words. I am glad to see you enjoyed my work. Feel free to stop by and read anytime.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 15, 2008

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    This is so harmonious, I can picture what you see, the image helps that too and I can feel what you feel. Very serene and gentle, chose the perfect background to go along with this piece.


  • GypsyEyes
    January 12, 2008

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    love the picture! you have a lovely poem here! great imagery! thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
    ~NineTailedFox


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 21, 2007

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    You have shared your favorite place and what a wonderful place it is!...I know for a fact your Hetane loves the water...sighs with my sister, he will return soon


    • freespirit51
      December 21, 2007
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      Tender wolf

      Thanks dear big sister. My Hetane described our secret place to me and this is how I imagined it.


  • Ali - Pie
    December 16, 2007

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    you painted a beautiful picture with this poem, i really love it!


    • freespirit51
      December 16, 2007
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      all-pie

      Thanks so glad you enjoyed it. It is a very specail place in my heart.


  • daviscth silver member
    December 15, 2007

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    What a beautiful place you took me to!!!!! The last line was simple amazing. It says it all. Job well done my dear friend!!! I'm so glad I got to read this.


    • freespirit51
      December 16, 2007
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      daviscth

      Thanks my friend I am glad you enjoyed our trip to my specail place.


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    WHAT ELSE COULD THERE BE!

    This to so many of us would be heaven on earth I love nature and to just lie back and enjoy it with my special someone would be my answered prayers.

    • freespirit51
      December 16, 2007
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      Puppydog

      Thanks so glad you enjoyed it. My Hetane described what our specail place would be like. And this was it. Sounds great doesn't it?


  • CherryOnTop
    December 15, 2007
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    Thank you and good luck in my contest.

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