Mister president
Do you really feel you've done no wrong
Mistakes were made and now we long
for the days when the news was short
Everything wasnt brought to court
A friends and family were home with us
Not in a foreign world where they learn to cuss
Please mister president learn from your mistakes
I may be just a child for all those affected my heart truly aches
You messed up big time
Please bring our soldiers home this time
So many more thing I have to say
Sorta like Benedict Arnold us you betray
You said more soldiers was for the best
But all that happened were more laid to rest
Will this be the future of our home
Leaving many time to roam
Leaving us time to think
think about all that has happened in a blink
Please mister president try to fix this
bring our country back from such a dark abyss
You will have to leave office in 2008
do you really want to make your mark with peoples hate
Before you leave do this for me
Your swan song
Something people will remember in the dawn
A contest entry
- Dear Mister President by lesbian-in-love.
750 points, ended December 29, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - no title by lee-sharp.
1500 points, ended January 15, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Mania for all! Give me your favorites! by Salt Therapy.
375 points, ended December 28, 2007, 80 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
constructive critizism welcome
Comments
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AHHHHHHHH IT BLINDS
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Not bad at all. The poem was good. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this poem is awesome... It tells so much... and i agreewe should bring our people home. Keep up the writing
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