another fight, fast approaching
words spoken but not meant
i truly don't mean to hurt you
that's never my intent
i just cannot ever think straight
i just go into a blind rage
that anger inside builds up
until being realeased from it's fleshy cage
i'll love you until the end
and i know we can make it through the rain
don't let the lightning strike us down
for i'll have to blame love for the pain
A contest entry
- Quickie for under 19's ~*~if not full after a week open for all~*~ by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended December 26, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i loved this one too, very strong and i can understand this.. the last stana was so sweet and hopeful...
i like it !
Shuberth
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Your words have such energy!!! Good write
Hey girl, it's been a while since I've sat down for a good read. But I see that yours are always that. Another good write with deep emotion. Your friend, Skip, -
Great rhyme and meaning behind it all. Especially the middle stanza. I felt the emotion of this poem. Whether it is personal or not, I felt the words come alive off the page.
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powerfully expressed from the prompt which holds depth and emotion within it. well done and best of luck in the contest
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