Dream was to see
What I loved
Vision was to grow
How I dreamed.
Happy is the word
I know not for long
Falls are what played
enemy to my happiness.
Game is my life
I wished to stop
Playing with troubles
Those seem to be gaming.
Prayed my god
He sent me gift
I met His Envoy
A beautiful Angel
Candelabra tied on head
Hands holding flowers
She smiled at me
My sorrows were gone!
It was a day
Of sorrow
Happiness was what
Wanted to borrow
I love my pillow
That brings in my dream
An Angel in Yellow!
Sorrow O Sorrow
See you tomorrow
Joy O Joy
Am gonna Enjoy!
A contest entry
- A good Lyric by Kiddy.
385 points, ended January 7, 2008, 10 entries
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This is my first poem please comment
Comments
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Excellent Write ....
This is an example for how should be a lyric... Fantastic beginning and excellent finality... Proper choice of words shaped the poem into a good lyric... I could sing it aloud... having metrical and rhythmic breaks everywhere, the poem looks complete...
The theme and idea that sing in this poem are lovely lovely...
Thanks for sharing
- Love
Kiddy
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