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Christmas Day

It was Christmas day
I was asleep
When I heard Santa clause through the chimney peep
He brought lots of presents
Ate cookies and milk
Went back out the chimney
To fly away
With Rudolph the reindeer
On Christmas day

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Name: Elana
Age:11
P.S. I am jewish

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  • longlife
    December 25, 2007

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    that is very cute!!!! I love this poem!my FAVE part was....Went back out the chimney
    To fly away
    With Rudolph the reindeer
    On Christmas day
    GOOD JOB!!!! wait,..GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! huh????? WHATS WITH THE TEAR?